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your mouth is white and hunched,
and the air is thick with mountains
    -- your brows are steep peaks
i see stone hewn in your head

there is a landslide behind your teeth;
i step -- beneath the rolling weight
   of climbing free and far


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your anger is a heap of boulders


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Jayne was telling us about how when she was little, she believed that making her mouth small showed how angry she was. Nate and i instantly proceeded to make our mouths as tiny as humanly possible.
Nate's lips were white and hunched--and somehow, this poem was born that day.


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October 26, 2011
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