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Perspective Is Reality...Perspective is reality, she thought as she lay sprawled amid the alarming messiness accumulating atop her very unmade bed, unfinished Chemistry homework sandwiched, forgotten, beneath her. Sitting up and stretching mightily, she pondered her latest activities. The numbers of the digital clock perched precariously on the edge of her cluttered dresser now read 2:48 AM. Oh good, she thought as she attempted to fix her tangled hair, it's only 1:36. (For no apparent reason, the clock had suddenly jumped ahead one day last summer; she had yet to figure out how to fix it.) Hair once more piled messily on top of her head, she once again wondered idly

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These Morning Bonesby *lovelyloon

Photography / Abstract & Surreal / Abstract

_{Things where i live.}

Critique by `ArtisnotanAccident Oct 12, 2011, 8:06:46 PM

The use of two photos really works to your pieces advantage in this instance. The two perspectives play off one another, enhancing the lines of each photograph, almost creating a optical illusion. It creates a sense of curving in the lines. The pastels and subtle hues give the sense of an early dawn or sunrise. I especially love the soft focus in the photo to the right. If I could change one thing, I would extend the white border on the vertical, but don't separate the two. The pair were meant for one another, as I'm sure was your intent.

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*mayat-s Apr 9, 2012 Hobbyist Photographer

very nice

*lovelyloon Apr 20, 2012

_{Why shanks.}

~editboy23 Dec 14, 2011

I love the color. Nice work

~stephanie-ann Oct 24, 2011 Professional Photographer

This should be printed and put on everyone's walls. Hehe. Or at least yours!

*Royce-Barber Oct 12, 2011

this photo reminds me of;

a school closed for the summer.
toy frog.
stuffed animal plushies.
soccer.
hair conditioner .
water treatment plant.
wondering where a bridge leads to.
aloe cactus.
magnificent wandering balloons.
basket of fruit on an all-white porch.
looking through a fish bowl.
the chaos of excitement, running barefoot through grass.

*lovelyloon Oct 13, 2011

_{Splendid..!

Haha, mission accomplished.
Or...something.

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i'm glad you could just let your mind wander where it would.}

*Royce-Barber Oct 13, 2011

humanity was designed with the most creativity ever used, and it was installed into us, that we may create. you are very much in tune with this. <3

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